JR Alila’s BIRTHRIGHT Readers’ Comment


 

It seems to have a hook, you want to read more; there is a rhythm to the prose, good and appropriate, metaphors and similes. A knowledge and study of subtle human mannerisms. It flows along beautifully. You write exceptionally well — As far as I can tell it’s pretty damn good. Good Luck!

http://www.amazon.com/Joseph-R.-Alila/e/B002QD5TDM

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